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Disturbed_Forever



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PostSubject: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 2:01 pm

i forgot to mention this when i was introducing myself, i write poems.. i dont think most of them are very good but other people seem to think they are really good.. please let me know what you think!! im open to all comments, suggestions and opinions and some of them dont have names:

no name:

we talk all day
we talk most of the night
you always tell me you love me
you always tell me how much you care about me
at first i thought i couldnt believe you
because of how ive been hurt before
but as time went on i realized..
i can believe you
i should believe you
and i do believe you
and you know what?
i love you too
i love you so much more than i thought
i could ever love a guy
i never thought i would find the perfect guy for me
until i found you
you are so perfect
and you mean so much to me
and now that ive found you
and i have you
im never letting go
youre mine
and youre mine until the end

follow your heart:

when you see a guy you like,
follow your heart
when you see a person in need of help
follow your heart
always follow your heart
cuz its usually right
i broke up with this amazing guy twice
and neither time did i follow my heart
now im sitting here thinking about him
and thinking about how stupid i was
for not following my heart
if i followed my heart,
i wouldnt have broken up with him in the first place
we would still be together and i wouldnt be
sitting here wondering why i didnt follow my heart
and crying on the inside
i gotta try to stay strong
its just one guy, right?
wrong. its THE guy
the guy i want to be with
but i screwed it up twice already
and i doubt its gonna happen again
because we will probably never be together again
so now i sit here, not crying on the inside
now im crying on the outside
why? cuz i love him
and i cant stay strong.

dumbass (i once felt this way.. dont anymore):

here she is
her name is kayla
she is such a dumbass
why? cuz she broke up with an amazing guy twice
and now shes definitely regretting it
she said she doesnt like being committed
and she likes flirting with different guys more
or is it really that shes afraid of being hurt?
but she really shouldnt be afraid of that
when with him
she knows he will treat her right
she knows he will do anything for her
she knows he is perfect for her
she knows he is everything shes ever wanted in a guy
she knows he is an awesome guy
she doesnt want to lose him.. ever.
so why did she end it with him twice?
well i have an answer for that,
because shes a dumbass

malyki (my cat):

everyone knows i think about it every day
not a day goes by that i dont think about it
you started to get sick when we first moved in
as soon as i left on vacation you got more sick
i came back and the next day you passed away
if we hadnt moved maybe youd still be alive...?

no name 2:

you know i love you
i love you so much it hurts
but it hurts more when i have to admit
that im not ready for this
i see myself with you in the future
but you live too far away from me
for me to hold onto you
until we can be together
i know you love me and you know i love you
and although it hurts for me to say
i have to say it
i love you to death and thats why
i can no longer hold onto you
i cant hurt you or myself anymore
baby, i love you but i gotta say the most painful word
ive ever had to say...
GOODBYE

jason (ex):

so theres this guy named jason
oh my god is he drop dead gorgeous!
i met him about a little more than half a year ago
we used to be really close friends
but as time went on, we got closer and closer
in fact we got so close that we're now together
we've been together for almost one month
he means so much to me, i cant even explain
i can try, but no matter how much i try, i cant even begin to say it all
if i ever lost him for good, i have no clue what i would do
hes my love, my life, my world, my guy
every time someone mentions the name "jason"
my whole face lights up with happiness
he knows just what to say to make me feel like im on top of the world
if someone was to ask me if i love him, i would say YES before
they got a chance to even finish the question
bottom line, i love him with all my heart
and that'll never change

cheezburgers (long story.. friend loves them):

im writing this poem about cheezburgers cuz sinead told me so
most cheezburgers are good but some can be greasy and taste like crap so
when cooking a cheezburger be very careful not to burn it
it will smell bad and not look like a zit (thank god)
i know, i know, this poem is not good
and does not look or taste like wood
but she told me to make one so im doing just that
be careful not to eat too many mcdonalds cheezburgers, they will make you fat
my step dad makes really good cheezburgers and puts beer in them
but dont worry they cant make you look like a drunk gem
dont worry this poem is pretty much done
i know youve been wishing from the start that it will end
but now its over and arent you glad?

sinead (friend thats obsessed with cheezburgers):

i have this friend, her name is sinead
she is very smart and gets good grades
she is a very good friend and she means so much to me
if there is anyone in this world, its her i want to be
she is very funny and has a really good sense of humor
i hear her say "icanhascheezburger.com" more and more
she really likes animals, her favorite are dogs
she has one of her own, plus she has a hog
the hog would be her brother, his name not important
hes kinda small, but not like an ant
i know its hard to tell, but hes a boy
he likes his sister the most to annoy
but enough about him hes not my best friend
i need to talk about sinead until the end
she really enjoys field hockey and softball
talks about them a lot and she likes purple
if you asked her about the teacher she hates the most
i guarantee she will definitely say mr. mcgraw
she would say he's boring, a jerk, and a pervert
she really likes mrs. commito and mrs. utton
but enough about them, this is the end.

if:

if life was fair, there would be no pain, no extinction,
no abuse, no suffering, no crying, no starving,
no homeless, no jobless, no such thing as death,
only birth
but you know, you gotta look at the reality of it,
there cant be no such thing as being jobless, because there arent enough jobs for everyone
if there was no such thing as death and only birth, the world would over populate with people
if there was no such thing as extinction, the world would over populate with animals.

no name 3:


this is for all those people out there
who like to see people in pain
who like to take advantage of people
especially little girls
i dont see how anyone can possibly do that
its just not right
there is no such thing as "safe" in this world anymore
whoever said "love makes the world go round"
well, sorry but i dont believe in that anymore
ever since the incident with brooke and her uncle...
well, its just awful and i hope the law doesnt give it a second thought
about those stupid jerks being hanged so they cant do it to anyone else
it just wasnt fair for them to do that to her
she was only a child
i hope they know how many people they hurt
i know they dont care because if they did they wouldnt have done it in the first place
but they need to realize what they did
and not give it a second chance

the one:

havent you realized what youve done?
you made me feel like i was the one
you didnt tell me there was that other girl
i thought you were the one, you called me your pearl
i see you sitting across the room
we used to cuddle and go out with a bang and a boom
but that was way back when i could call you mine
i cant believe you made me think you were kind
what was it that i couldve done better?
you started to hate me ever since you met her
i know what she did to you
she makes me look like a fool
now i am starting to give up on you
and you dont seem to care
and now neither do i

no name 4:

as days go by, i sometimes wonder if this is real
or is it all a game, a dream, or our imagination?
is this just a practice life for our afterlife
or is this it? is there another life after this?
these are the questions i often ask myself
i look at the world and wonder
if its so great, than why are so many people in pain?
life is such a weird thing
with all the stress, the pain, the starving people, the abuse,
and everything else thats going on
i mean, just look at that girl, brooke bennett
she was only 12 and disappeared for a week
police found her buried in freshly disturbed dirt
just down the road from her uncles house
what has the world come to?
its not safe anymore

no name 5:

every minute, every second that goes by
without talking to you makes me wanna cry
sometimes i wonder how i can go a day without you around
and how i can go without hearing your sound
oh what i would give just to hold your hand
and tell all my friends that you're my man
what can i do to get you to notice me
and make you stop drooling over her beauty
i cant seem to get you out of my mind
i wish you would realize what you're leaving behind
you should know that i've loved you from the start
and know that you will never leave my heart
i cant believe you still dont notice me
even when you can obviously see
that every time i am around you
i turn red and my mind turns to goo
but now i start to fall for another guy
as you start to fall for me
but youre too late, shouldve come before
where were you when i was crying myself to sleep?
but look whos the one with a broken heart now

no name 6:

i see you sitting there across the room
you see me staring at you
as you begin to fill my head with wonder
does he like me too, or am i just wasting my time?
i miss those times when he would say those three little words
he always knew what to do to put a smile on my face
sometimes i wonder why i waste my time
and why you're always on my mind
should i give up now
or hold on a while longer?
i really dont know what to do
i cant seem to stay away from you
you drive me crazy with your beautiful eyes
looking into my soul
like a mirror
but now you're talking to your friends
as i talk to mine
now you're staring at me
but i am no longer looking at you

sam (ex):

i have this friend, his name is sam
hes always there for me whenever i need him
he will always understand who i am
hes a metalhead with a slash of punk
and dont worry, hes not a drunk (lol)
hes the greatest friend i have ever met
and hes the best it will get
i cant thank him enough for everything hes done
for him the greatest band, lamb of god is the one
please never call him emo, because hes not
hes a good person and means a lot
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 2:11 pm

I'd say you're a strange one.

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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 2:58 pm

I'm a strange one?? Why do you say that?
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:02 pm

Did you read the stuff you posted? Tongue

You're young though, I'll give you that. I probably wouldn't post stuff I wrote when I was a freshman or sophmore in high school.

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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:43 pm

u sux.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:44 pm

you'll likely look back at this stuff in a couple of years and be like "What the hell was I thinking?"

at least that's how I feel about 90% of the poems I wrote when I was your age.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:14 pm

umm yeah thanks..
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:19 pm

They are not trying to be mean. Well...maybe Loose Nut...(just ignore him).
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:00 pm

no, i'm not trying to be mean... it's just that things that seem really important at your age (and again i can only base this on my own experiences) don't seem so important as you get older. i have countless poems about "unrequited love" and all of that stuff from guys who seemed SO important at the time.

if i read that stuff now, the only poems i can even tolerate anymore are the ones involving things that are still important to me today--like my relationship with my father, for an example.

it's sort of like reading an old journal or diary you've kept. things from 5 or so years ago seem so stupid.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:25 pm

thank you dead on arrival.. yeah, well i dont really care what people think of my poems.. they're just thoughts that come to my head all of a sudden and i right them down.. then i share them with people to see what they think.. doesnt really matter..
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:31 pm

You're welcome. But yes, look out for Loose Nut and Cghost. Maybe TheNamelessOne.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Mon Jul 28, 2008 11:28 am

alright i will, thanks for letting me know.. i definitely like you better than some of these people *cough.. loose nut.. cough* lol
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:26 pm

Tongue Yea, I'm one of the nice ones. I'm only mean if someone gets on my nerves.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:06 pm

Yea, I wont get on your nerves, you seem pretty cool
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Wed Jul 30, 2008 1:07 am

tl;dr

quote="Loose Nut"]u sux.[/quote]

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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:54 am

i really dont care what you and loose nut think of me or my poems
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Fri Aug 01, 2008 8:09 pm

Sucks.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Fri Aug 01, 2008 8:40 pm

Thanks.. I don't care!! You, Loose nut, and Cghost are just three more people in life that I don't care what you think about.. Picked a bad night to tell me they suck. I am already in a bad enough mood right now and I don't need to put up with anymore shit. So I really don't care what you three think!!!!!! I know they suck. My poems suck, my thoughts suck, most people suck, LIFE SUCKS!
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Fri Aug 01, 2008 8:46 pm

Go kill yourself emo kid. Oh, and obviously you care if you sit there and post some dumbass rant about how you don't care. Grow the fuck up or end yourself.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Fri Aug 01, 2008 9:04 pm

1) im not emo
2) emos arent always like that
3) whatever
4) people like you shouldnt be talking to people like me when im feeling like this cuz if i wasnt smart, then i probably would go end myself
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Fri Aug 01, 2008 10:17 pm

if stuff online like this makes someone commit suicide, they should have been getting help in real life instead of seeking encouragement online...

as we've discussed, you don't know the people you talk to online. therefore, they are the LAST people you should depend on for anything.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Fri Aug 01, 2008 10:20 pm

Wise words Shea.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Fri Aug 01, 2008 10:22 pm

i've dealt with a lot of people struggling with depression and other things like that.

this is not the place for them.

i can seem harsh at times, though I'm usually joking. but it's nearly impossible to tell online. people in real life are hard enough to trust; online it's much, much worse.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Fri Aug 01, 2008 10:25 pm

It's hard to trust or rely upon anyone these days. Often there is only a few people you can trust or rely upon to help you out. Most of those times it's someone you least thought would be of help.
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PostSubject: Re: all of my poems i written so far   Fri Aug 01, 2008 10:27 pm

very true. and too often, the people who you think you can trust turn on you. that's why you have to end up depending on those "least expected" people. ha
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