Starting off okay... but it turns really generic and blah. Get rid of that vocalist, I say.
You know, I enjoy the metalcore and deathcore sound... but this shit HAS to go. All these bands sound the same. I even realize that shit like black metal and death metal sounds the same... but those genres have a more interesting sound. You can only do the dissonant chord progression and start-stop riffing so much before you start to say FUCK OFF.
Surrender to all Life Beyond Form
Lance of Longinus on Bandcamp
Noise Redemption Prophecy on Bandcamp