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PostSubject: Devastation   Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:19 am

This is the devastation
of finding that all I've ever wanted
is not my reality
This is the feeling
of isolation and abandonment
in my times of need

One quick - click
And it's all gone
One quick - fix
And I'm lying prone
Now, in this
Facedown, no hope
Give me something to cope with

Now I'm gone
Now I'm gone

This is the end of my world
A solution to the problem
Rests in my right hand
The solution of all the problems
Lies in yours
And now we continue to the end

One quick - click
And it's all gone
One quick - fix
And I'm lying prone
Now, in this
Facedown, no hope
Give me something to cope with

Scratching and clawing
To the surface
I need a breath of fresh air
In this dank room
I'm sinking so fast
No end to this
I've given up hope

This is the devastation
of finding that all I've ever wanted
is not my reality
This is the feeling
of isolation and abandonment
This is death
This is complete

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PostSubject: Re: Devastation   Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:58 pm

hehe not where i was going with it.

but i like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Devastation   Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:00 pm

Love isn't something I can write about. But still, I think it's got a nice blend of up-beat music and a bit depressing subject matter to get the contrast I wanted.

You can write your own version if you'd like... just to see where it goes? I'm not really deadset on this.

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PostSubject: Re: Devastation   Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:01 pm

i might try.

and that might not even go where i originally though.
i really, really want to do something about the stuff i've been through (which isn't unrequited love. haha)
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PostSubject: Re: Devastation   Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:10 pm

Do you think "Devastation" is the right song? Or do you have something in mind? We can always sit down and write a song together, you know?

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PostSubject: Re: Devastation   Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:14 pm

i have no idea what i think the music should be.
i told you i can't write music.

i just have a lot of thoughts i'd like to put into a song, if i could.
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PostSubject: Re: Devastation   Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:18 pm

Write the lyrics. Find the melodies. Then I can come down one weekend and we can do the music?

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PostSubject: Re: Devastation   Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:21 pm

i'll work on my thoughts and see what happens.
then we can see where it goes, etc. i'm having trouble finding time to do too much... plus, anna's here this month. bleh.
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PostSubject: Re: Devastation   Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:24 pm

I'd need to know in advance anyway to make sure I'm off.

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