The Dark Academy

Welcome to the Dark Academy.

The Dark Academy

Home of the Sith hopefuls!

Home

Home

Portal

Register

Register Log in

Log in

The Dark Academy :: The Legend of the Dark Academy :: Story Feedback

Share |

So...

View previous topic

View next topic

Go down

Author

Message

m1:35
Admin

Posts: 12057
Age: 22
Location: In a galaxy far, far away...
Registered: 2008-05-06

Character sheet
Name: Loxxikus
Rank: Sith Cadet
Experience Points: 25/100

Subject: So... Sun Jul 06, 2008 10:45 pm

On this board you guys will just give me feedback on the story. The actual story board is read-only for everyone but admins. This is so that the story can keep a continuous flow without disruptions with comments and discussions. Hope you guys enjoy it. _________________ http://www.myspace.com/m135 http://www.variedcelluloid.net/forum/index.php http://rateyourmusic.com/collection/Loxxikus/oo It's fun until someone gets poo on them.

Back to top

Go down

http://www.myspace.com/m135

Dead on Arrival

Posts: 3288
Registered: 2008-05-06

Character sheet
Name: Aerynn
Rank: Sith Cadet
Experience Points: 25/100

Subject: Re: So... Mon Jul 07, 2008 3:13 pm

I can't wait for the rest of it.

Back to top

Go down

m1:35
Admin

Posts: 12057
Age: 22
Location: In a galaxy far, far away...
Registered: 2008-05-06

Character sheet
Name: Loxxikus
Rank: Sith Cadet
Experience Points: 25/100

Subject: Re: So... Mon Jul 07, 2008 3:25 pm

Yeah... _________________ http://www.myspace.com/m135 http://www.variedcelluloid.net/forum/index.php http://rateyourmusic.com/collection/Loxxikus/oo It's fun until someone gets poo on them.

Back to top

Go down

http://www.myspace.com/m135

Dead on Arrival

Posts: 3288
Registered: 2008-05-06

Character sheet
Name: Aerynn
Rank: Sith Cadet
Experience Points: 25/100

Subject: Re: So... Tue Jul 08, 2008 2:53 pm

You are a really good writer. Keep it up.

Back to top

Go down

IAmHeavenSent
Admin

Posts: 4236
Age: 20
Registered: 2008-05-07

Character sheet
Name: Cuddy
Rank: Sith Cadet
Experience Points: 25/100

Subject: Re: So... Tue Jul 08, 2008 4:01 pm

maybe cuddy only pretends to be weak at heart? haha j/k that was fun to read. _________________ I am lame times 213587235723 (number subject to change)

Back to top

Go down

m1:35
Admin

Posts: 12057
Age: 22
Location: In a galaxy far, far away...
Registered: 2008-05-06

Character sheet
Name: Loxxikus
Rank: Sith Cadet
Experience Points: 25/100

Subject: Re: So... Thu Jul 10, 2008 2:44 am

Thanks... There is another longer part up now. Tell me what you think of how I use the dueling system with the story. _________________ http://www.myspace.com/m135 http://www.variedcelluloid.net/forum/index.php http://rateyourmusic.com/collection/Loxxikus/oo It's fun until someone gets poo on them.

Back to top

Go down

http://www.myspace.com/m135

Dead on Arrival

Posts: 3288
Registered: 2008-05-06

Character sheet
Name: Aerynn
Rank: Sith Cadet
Experience Points: 25/100

Subject: Re: So... Thu Jul 10, 2008 3:14 pm

I loved it.

Back to top

Go down

IAmHeavenSent
Admin

Posts: 4236
Age: 20
Registered: 2008-05-07

Character sheet
Name: Cuddy
Rank: Sith Cadet
Experience Points: 25/100

Subject: Re: So... Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:26 am

psh. who cares if i'm gullible? at least i have a pretty face. seriously. hahahah i've enjoyed the story!! _________________ I am lame times 213587235723 (number subject to change)

Back to top

Go down

Dead on Arrival

Posts: 3288
Registered: 2008-05-06

Character sheet
Name: Aerynn
Rank: Sith Cadet
Experience Points: 25/100

Subject: Re: So... Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:54 am

I enjoyed it also. I'm looking forward to more.

Back to top

Go down

So...

View previous topic

View next topic

Back to top

Page 1 of 1

Permissions of this forum:

You cannot reply to topics in this forum

The Dark Academy :: The Legend of the Dark Academy :: Story Feedback